Do you want to write a post about your trip to Europe for the letter E, Jade?
Sure, mom.
Jade, my 15 year old, has always been an artist. She came out of the womb, pen in hand, ready to create. Inclined to be quite independent, she does her own thing as illustrated by her poem below. She agreed to write, just not about Europe. 🙂
EnchantingÂ
May the world disintegrate
and have everything fall apart
i will not care;
for how one regards a heart
And if the world shall disappear
O, forgive me if it does!
remember all that once occurred
of everything that was
All we can ever do
is force ourselves to see
past the clouds, the scattered stars
and relish in the memories
Few will glow, lit by my thoughts
through the foggy grey
but the few that do
will lead you, most certainly, on your way
The Enchanting ones will show;
ones of thought-provoking tales
the luring ones, we musn’t forget;
they shall come as well
And you’ll see this painting you have made
coloured by all you’ve seen
traced and perfected by all your doings
signed by where you’ve been
O, how changed it will feel
and scary it may seem
how far away the enchanting times are
your thoughts may very well deem
But blessed are you
to still have the thoughts
to still see the moments where
you were once thrilled and enchanted by lots
E is for Enchanting
but enchanting stands for what
enchanting is for the memories I’ve shared
and for the ones I have not
We may share our tales of adventure,
my friend, all in due time
but now was where I was asked to write
and not to vaguely put in rhyme
For Enchanting deserves a story
for it’s a story that enchants ourselves
but i’m a petty fool,
and can not write a story of enchanting by myself
So tell me your tales of enchantment
moments when you felt
that rush of immediate adrenaline
that rarely ever melts
Share with me, your definition
of what Enchanting is to you
put it in a story, or like I,
a vague poem too
Happy A to Zs from Jade and The Family C
Simply put ‘ beautiful ‘ SUCH INSIGHT
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Yes, your talented niece 🙂
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What a great poem. Your daughter is very talented. Has she ever been published? My granddaughter has been writing poetry and songs since she was first taught to put letters together to form words.
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She was once published in a students’ book for writing at a national level. Her goal is to be an author. She is an obsessed writer who writes for hours after school each day.
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Wow…. !!!! Kind of speechless right now! that was just amazing. thank you!
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Thank you for dropping by. Glad you enjoyed it. Cheryl (on behalf of Jade 🙂
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That was a beautiful piece of writing, Jade. Thank you. And keep it up!
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Thanks so much. Jade
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Wow! So deep!
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Thanks!
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Amazing! You have an amazing daughter that clearly has a talent! She’s a keeper. =)
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Thanks. I will be sure to pass on the compliment to her. Cheryl
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Jade is unbelievable, Cheryl. Any teacher would love to have her in their classes. Great job. Please pass it on. Good chatting last night. We are heading for the beach this morning. Eunice
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I will pass that on to her this morning, if she ever wakes up! Have fun in the sun and at the beach too. C
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Lovely!
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Thanks Dawn. I will let Jade know. Have a great day, Cheryl
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Lovely poem. Keep up with the writing 🙂
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Thanks so much. I will pass that onto Jade. Have a great day, Cheryl
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Wow, this is really great writing. Please know that I am not even one for poetry, but this COMPLETELY spoke to me. That is one talented young lady! Great mom-ing, Cheryl!
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Thanks so much. I am never one for poetry and as a teacher, I struggle to teach it. Haiku is my thing as it is short and sweet. I will pass on the compliment. Thanks for sharing, Cheryl
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